My thirty day goal.

  Hello. My name is Tommy Song. I want to tell you guys about my goal in thirty days.I was so impressed after I listened to the presentation of the presenter's thirty day goals. So I want to do that too. I'm now in the GLPS camp so I have to tell you about my goal while I'm in this camp.
  First of all, my first goal is to end GLPS successfully. That means, I don't get punished by PAs or  TAs and don't get any yellow card or red cards while I'm in this camp. If I get a yellow cards or red cards, I can get green cards and catch up. I chose that goal, which is end GLPS successfully, I don't want to punished. If I get those yellow cards or green cards, my mind will not comfortable and not good. And, everybody will be disappointed to me and will tease me that I got a yellow or red cards. To accomplish this goal, first, I have to try my best. If I don't try my best, that's nothing!!!! Secondly, can't be late in our class and follow the instructions of the teacher. If we are late, I'm going to get yellow cards. Also, if I don't follow the teacher's instructions, I might get a red card. So my camp will be failed and I can't achieve my first goal.
  My second goal is to get awards. That means, I want to get many green cards. To achieve this goal, I have to do two things. The first one is to be good at something I can do well. I can do well in archery or debate so I can try my best to get a good grade. Then I can get some green cards. Second step is to be an honor student. To be an honor student, we have to listen to the teacher very well, pay attention to the class and do the work and try my best. Also, friends will gonna respect me well.
  My third goal is to make many friends. If we make many friends, we can't be lonely and we can easily adapt to the new society or surroundings. To do it, I have to talk to my fellows, because we are in the same GLPS camp, we are all same friends. We can be all friends. When we get along each other, I need to keep our friendship, we both have to be friendly and kind to my friend. And we both get happy if we do friendly and kind
  So these are my thirty day goals. I hope you guys enjoyed it.

Hello GLPS!

Hi, every GLPS students. My name is TaeJoon Song. My nickname is Tommy. I am 13 years old and I'm in the 6th grade in Koong nae elementary school. I love to read Harry Potter books. Last time, until I was 5th grade, I didn't like to read Harry Potter books, but when I got into 6th grade, I started to understand it and started to read it and now, I'm almost addicted. My second goal is to listen to music. I am many good pop songs or classic songs. I like to listen to the music because when I listen to the music, I am really relaxed and comfortable. My favorite subject is science. Because I like science and it is fun to do the science experiments. Also, when I do the experiments, I can learn better because I actually feel it and see it. My second favorite subject is English. My dream job is to be an ambassador and ambassador should do the English well. I came to this camp last Sunday, July twenty first. I expect that I can do well at this camp. I am weak at writing so I have to do my best especially the writing part.
So I expect that I can do well at this camp.