Hi, every GLPS students. My name is TaeJoon Song. My nickname is Tommy. I am 13 years old and I'm in the 6th grade in Koong nae elementary school. I love to read Harry Potter books. Last time, until I was 5th grade, I didn't like to read Harry Potter books, but when I got into 6th grade, I started to understand it and started to read it and now, I'm almost addicted. My second goal is to listen to music. I am many good pop songs or classic songs. I like to listen to the music because when I listen to the music, I am really relaxed and comfortable. My favorite subject is science. Because I like science and it is fun to do the science experiments. Also, when I do the experiments, I can learn better because I actually feel it and see it. My second favorite subject is English. My dream job is to be an ambassador and ambassador should do the English well. I came to this camp last Sunday, July twenty first. I expect that I can do well at this camp. I am weak at writing so I have to do my best especially the writing part.
So I expect that I can do well at this camp.
Your introduction is well written but hard to read because it is so narrow. I think putting your pictures at the end of the post would be better.
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