SNAKEMAN
In 2050, there was a person named Balo Frank. He was about thirty years old, and he was a scientist who wanted to make people don't die. He thought of a lizard skin. Because if we cut the lizard's skin, it grows up again. He thought He thought that kind of things to people! He took some of the lizard's DNA and put it into the syringe and injected into his body. Suddenly, he thought that he is like a snake. Then, he transformed into a half body and half snake man. He thought of other things like lizard and he transformed into a lizard. Finally, he thought of him and he changed into original him again. But the strange thing was he has some sticky things on his hands and toes. He could climb because his skin is like a reptile. There was an another man named Kwang and he was the boss of the Ball team. The Ball team was a bad team which wanted to control the Earth. The government wanted to destroy them but he couldn't because Kwang was really silent and good at hiding. He was about thirty years old and invented the poison and it could easily kill the reptiles. He injected the poison to all of the Ball team members and they were strong. Kwang wanted to kill Balo Frank because he accidentally killed Kwang's wife by the car accident. He wanted to avenge him.
Balo Frank named him a Snake man. and made his suit which was green and very tough. Suddenly, some loud noise heard. The Ball team killed all the people with their poison. They all become undead, like zombies and the Ball team attacked the Snakeman's house. Snake man got very angry and transformed into a snake. He was very flexible and could dodge very well. Also, he could easily get into the jets or machines and shot some poisons, the snake has it too. He attacked and jump. He was fighting in New York where every citizens became like zombie. But the Ball team shot some poisons.He dodged it and attacked them. Now, he transformed into a crocodile. He became really strong and he could easily kill people.
The Ball team also went to Korea, Seoul, and attacked the citizens. The Snake Man went into his jet and flew to Korea. He put his DNA and attached to his wife. She became a Snake Woman. Both of them dodged, attacked and transformed, destroyed every one in the Ball team. The Keong Bok Palace was destroyed and the building were crashed by jets and tanks. The Snake Man and Snake Woman's cooperation was terrific!!!!! They killed them and they made their cousins and relatives all the Snake Men and Snake Women. There were 16 totally. The boss was in Beijing. Millions of people in China became zombies. Snakes all turned into a crocodile and bit the zombies, kill them. However the boss was strong. He was in the core of the great wall of china. He made more and more people zombies and let them fight instead of him. Few of the snakes died because of the zombies and the Ball team but the Snake Man and the Snake Woman was safe. Finally, they fought with the boss, Kwang. Kwang had a special power, which is stop everything except him. he was trying to kill them with the poison. But, he couldn't. Because, the Snake Man and the Snake Woman were changed into turtles and hid inside into their shells.
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An intriguing story about a scientist using characteristics of lizard and reptiles. I was also impressed with many scientific ideas you used throughout your story. It would have been better if you had also included pictures. Great job :)
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB TOMMY!!!
ReplyDeleteI loved your story and ending but I think you can make the story more understandable by putting some pictures. If the readers start seeing your blog, they'll just see full of words so they'll be lazy and they won't read your blog. Put some pictures for the readers to have a intreset at the picture at the start
ReplyDeleteVery long and very good! Also Your story is interesting!!!
ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC